Nice job!
For as mininal a piece as it is, thecowering<?em> of the little elephant really comes across.
His slight tilt backward and the expression of his eye says it!
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"Doomsday device?...I suppose I could part with one and still be feared..."
I think the expressions are great, but my biggest crit would be the colour choice. Although the colours look good, they don't represent fear. Your illustration may have more effectively conveyed the message of fear by using stronger and deeper colours as opposed to pastels.
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"All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them." - Walt Disney
Thank you for your feedback.
You're right. Now that I think about it, the colours do not really represent fear at all. xP
I should have atleast made the background darker.
<3
I really like the colors and the way the two animals are almost shillohetes (i know that's spelled wrong)
I feel sorry for the little elephant very nice
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For as mininal a piece as it is, thecowering<?em> of the little elephant really comes across.
His slight tilt backward and the expression of his eye says it!
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"Doomsday device?...I suppose I could part with one and still be feared..."
Thank you. I'm glad that I successfully got the message across. <33
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I feel it, every time...
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"All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them." - Walt Disney
You're right. Now that I think about it, the colours do not really represent fear at all. xP
I should have atleast made the background darker.
<3
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I feel sorry for the little elephant
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GUY- I don't know...but don't eat the muffins...
And don't worry.. I can never spell that word right. xD
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